Monday, October 25, 2010

A concept of love by Deveika Menon in the form of a Poem with my comments as flashed on the f.b. on October 25,2010.


.by Deveika Menon on Monday, October 25, 2010 at 11:49am

If you make a mistake... let me make up for sure

If I make a mistake... I shall count on you for a cure
If I falter.... come near and just hold me tight
If you falter... I'll walk towards you to set it right                                                                                      If my words hurt you.....please pretend you didn't hear
If your words hurt me...I will treat it as something mere
If I pretend to not love you..... you show me all your golden love
If you pretend not to love me....I'll hold you close as my gift from above
If I don't show my love for you..... Understand I'm hiding some inner fright
If you don't show your love for me.... I promise I will do all to set things right
And so we move in our journey helping each other grow
Setting things straight when the seeds of doubts sow
Assuring and braving through the storm with the brightest of grins
If there is love then in the end its LOVE THAT ALWAYS WINS !!

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Mannu Kharbanda ..thank you soooo much jaan...

.Sonia Mehta deveika beautiful just like your heart is......i am so glad that i have found a friend like you....
· .Deveika Menon Mannu.... thankyou.. .. My very best wishes for Karwa Chauth and God bless both of you! love you!
· .Aaditi Sinha Love is patient, love is kind, love means slowly losing your mind....
 .Deveika Menon Thankyou Sonia.... love you and wishes to you for Karwa Chauth.. God bless you both
.Deveika Menon hehee Aaditi.. losing heart is fine.. but losing mind?? will have to check it out with a certain vella dost of mine

Sonia Mehta :thank you so much for your wishes ....nd i also pray that u find someone worth keeping karvachauth for.....
Romin Farooq: Beautiful Thaughts..Very well written

 .Deveika Menon Thankyou Sonia

· .Deveika Menon Thankyou so much Romin.. glad you enjoyed the poem

· .Raju Dagia ,Vinit Kaku love makes u mad, love makes u crazy, love makes u beautiful......when in love u live in bliss lovely words devika ... tks for tag..........ur a beauty girl xoxoxoxo

.Deveika Menon Thankyou Raju...You're so right about love.. yes yes yessss

 Raju:It was great going through the pictures of both of you.. one of the made for each other couples.. God bless you both.. Thankyou for the lovely words Raju

.Bishwanath Singh :
Thanks for sharing such a nice and well composed poem with me! . The bondage of love is not a purchasable commodity in the market when one can buy on throw-way prices. The word love can refer to a variety of different feelings, states, and ...attitudes, ranging from generic pleasure to intense interpersonal attraction .Love can also be referred specifically to the passionate desire and intimacy of romantic love, to the sexual love of Eros to the emotional closeness of familial love, or to the platonic love that defines friendship, to the profound oneness or devotion of religious love. This diversity of uses and meanings, combined with the complexity of the feelings involved, makes love unusually difficult to consistently define, even compared to other emotional states. Love in its various forms acts as a major facilitator of interpersonal relationships and, owing to its central psychological importance, is one of the most common themes in the arts. Although the nature or essence of love is a subject of frequent debate, different aspects of the word can be clarified by determining what isn't love. As a general expression of positive sentiment, love is commonly contrasted with hate as a less sexual and more emotionally intimate form of romantic attachment, love is commonly contrasted with lust; and as an interpersonal relationship with romantic overtones, love is commonly contrasted with friendship, although other definitions of the word love may be. Love often involves caring for or identifying with a person or thing, including oneself .In addition to cross-cultural differences in understanding love, ideas about love have also changed greatly over time. All you need is love. The love is to be delighted by the happiness of another. Though, we are living in space age, but the greatest tragedy one comes across that our present generation specially most of youths have started neglecting their spouse after their marriage and start fighting with each other even on flimsy grounds like demand of dowry, infatuations towards other opposite sex and imbalance in there I.Q & lack of mutual respects and because of superiority & inferiority complex that they often suffer. All these problems must be settled down amicably amongst married couples and try to adjust to live very happily together to have blissful married life.
I appreciate your wisdom and lovely presentation on love as what it means to others and how best,it should be carried out.

Rajkamal Gupta nice one...really like it..
Sammy Ladwa ‎:
Beautiful as always Deveika. I have just read a comment of one of your friends. Wow!! In no time I could see the words so very familiar. Can this world be so small? SO SMALL!!

Some common friend writes on wikipedia and wordpress and orkut ...about LOVE and here some friend of yours shares with you. Haha!!

As this common friend says - stealing from one person is plagarism but it is research when stolen from more than one.

Make a mistake and your taking would never be amissed. Love you.

.Deveika Menon Thankyou so much Bishwanathji.. you have very eloquently presented all about LOVE... the do's n the dont's.. Thanks so much for the lovely comment.. and ofcourse for the words of appreciation

· .Deveika Menon Hiyaaa Raj.. good to see you here.. thankyou

· .Deveika Menon Sammy...yeah i think i know what you mean.. well... there's not much i can say here...anyway lets just hope better sense prevails..

Good to see you Sammy and feels lovely to know you enjoyed the poem.. U

 .Krishnan Iyer Subramanian ‎ Love conquers all,,,

.Angela Argimon Love is never having to say you are sorry. Love forgives, forgets, love is a many splendored thing....

· .Raka Samson ‎:

Words simple yet deep.

 .Angela Argimon Deveika, if everybody will follow your lines of "Love always win" everybody will be more happy and enjoy their relationship deeper and deeper, thanks for sharing these beautiful lines!!

· .Nicholas Mascarenhas Devieka have said it all ..followed by all other beautiful freinds , what can i say further ..Hats off...yes you a beautiful woman ..with a beautiful mind ..beautiful heart ..your words keeps "Love" alive ..Becoz of beautiful people like you , the world is yet a place to live ..everything is not lost yet ...Hugs..

. · .Aravind Krishnan awwww!!so sweeet love will always win

· .George Samuel Only a pure heart can be full of love....and overflow with pure love...the poem just fills you with blissful thoughts....absolutely gem of a little poem......Thanks for the tag Deveika!!! =============================================================================
October 25,2010.

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